by sigmazero13
Caedar wrote:
sigmazero13 wrote:
The other wording would be:
"As attacker in battle, ambush cards cannot be played against you."
Granted, that is still only barely longer than the actual text.
As a rule of thumb, I prefer to bring prepositional phrase modifiers closer to the thing they're modifying, so I prefer "As attacker in battle, you..." versus "As attacker in battle, ambush cards cannot be played against you."
I used the same wording you did, just added the bit about being the attacker to match the original. :)